2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

作者词汇基础不错，还请增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Love At the front of the prison door, a girl was watching it being closed and his father fading away from her sight. She wanted to tell the truth to the judge, but she recalled her father’s warning that whatever has happened in that night, she must go on with her life on her own bravely , so she paused. However, the girl would never forget the night that has made her lose her father and changed her fate. From then on, she became a orphan. It was a dark evening several months ago. The girl stayed in her room. Suddenly ,the door was opened. A woman and a man came in, and they seemed to be discussing certain matter. The girl wondered who they were, so she came out from her room and listened to their dialogue secretly. To her surprise, she told from the woman’s voice that the woman was her mother. But she didn’t see the man.She hid herself in the corner and overheard that her mother wanted to divorce with her father because of the man. The girl was saddened, and she couldn’t believe that. Since the woman came to her home, she has never felt happy. The girl disliked her. Because in her eyes, she just had the only biological mother . What’s more, the stepmother never gave her any heart-warming care. At night, her father came back. She revealed all she had heard to her father. Her father came back to his room, and had a talk with his wife. For a while, the door was opened suddenly. And she watched as her father and her stepmother were quarreling in their room. Their quarrel grew more and more intense and her stepmother attempted to beat her father. At that moment, the girl picked up a knife unconsciously, rushed up, and inserted the knife into the chest of her stepmother. She fell down immediately, her chest bleeding. Panicked, she threw out the knife in a hurry. Her father went to clasp her make her calm down. The hands of the girl trembled. Then her father stood up, and picked up the knife. After thinking for a minute, he called the police, “someone was killed here.” then he said to the girl,“You must tell the police that it’s me who killed your stepmother. Honey, dad can’t accompany you anymore. You need to go forward with your life alone. Be brave!” Soon the police came and took away her father. The girl cried loudly and desperately. After several months, her father was sentenced to forty years in prison. Before that, she had ever hovered outside the police office several times, and determined to tell the truth to the police. But it’s too late. Her impulse-driven action ruined her family. Now, she understood everything, and became increasingly strong. Later, she needs to face all difficulties by herself. Right now, she learned a lesson that she will never do such foolish things.