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The Chinese saying says'seeing is believing',but many people misunderstand the meaning.They draw their conclusions as soon as they hear or see something, which is not wise. You walk though the street and suddenly, an old man is koncked by a bicycle and falls down,what will you do?In general, the first mind is to give a hand,but nowdays many people choose to be blind and do nothing about this.Why?Because some unpleasant situations happened before.In the same case, a young man came and gave a hand,but the old man,didn't show any thank,morever,he held the man's hands tightly and shouted to him asking compensation.He thought the man knocked down because he first saw him and came the conclusion without more thing.This hurted the man deeply and raised hot debate.The same phenomenon happened several times recently and many people say they don't want to help people in case of causing trouble.So draw conclusions immediately by seeing or hearing is not wise.
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