2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

作者要注意增加使用学术词汇，单词拼写做的挺好；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Love At the front of the prison gate, a girl was looking at it being closed gradually, and his father also was fading away from her sight. Her heart was extremely struggling. She intened to tell the truth to the judge, but she recalled her father’s warning that she will have to go on life alone bravely whatever has happened in that night, so she paused. However, the girl would never forget that night that has changed her fate, and，meanwhile lose her father. From then on, she became an orphan. It was a dark evening in the girl’s home several months ago. The girl stayed in her room quietly, suddenly the door was opened. A woman and a man both came in, and they seemed be discussing something. The girl’s was so wondered whom they were, so she came out from her room and listened to their dialogue secretly. To her surprise, the woman was her mother, but she never saw the man. She hid herself in the corner and discovered that her mother tended to divorce her father because of the man. The girl was exceddingly sad, and was not intensely willing to believe her ear. Since the woman came to her home, she never felt happy. The girl hated her, in her eyes, she just has one mother who was her biological mother. What’s more, the stepmother also never gave warm to her. At night, her father returned. She told all things that she had heard to her father. Her father came back to his room, and had a talk with his wife. For a while, the door was opened suddenly, her father and her stepmother were quarrelling in their room. The girl gawked at them, and picked up a knife unconsciously, because she wanted to protect her father. Their quarrel was more and more intense, her stepmother attempted to beat her father. At that moment, the girl rushed up, and the knife was inserted into the chest of her stepmother. She fell down immediately. Then the girl has been terrified, and thrown out the knife in a hurry. Her father clung on to the girl in order to make her calm down. The hands of the girl trembled. She didn't do it on purpose. Her father stood up, and picked up the knife. After thinking for a minute, he took him cell phone to put through the police station. He said to the police, “someone was killed here.” After that, he told her daughter, “If the police asked you who killed you mother, you must say that your mother was killed by me. Honey, dad can’t company with you anymore, you need to go on the life alone bravely, and forget anything happened tonight.” Soon the police came, they took away her father. The girl recovered from her surprise, and cried loudly and helplessly. After several months, her father was sentenced to forty years in prison. Before she ever had hovered around the outside police several times, and determined to tell the truth to the police. While it’s too late, her impulse-driven action ruined her family. Now, she understood everything, and became increasingly strong. Later, she needs to confront difficulties that she will meet. Right now, she learned a lesson that she will never do such foolish things.