2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer is one of the most important invention of 21st century.Because it changes the human's lives,work and study.And all of us couldn't leave the computer every day. Computer often be used to comunication with each other.A lots of comunication software,such as Skype,Tencent QQ etc, has become the most popular tool in the teenager.They could offer talking,converting files and picture,so that making person get closer. At the same time,Computer is a efficient tool for solving scientific problem.Many engineer develop masses of statistics' tool,such as Matlab and R,to help person