2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

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Deep Love At the front of the prison gate, a girl was looking at it being closed gradually, and his father also was fading away from her sight. Her heart was extremely struggling. She made an attempt to tell the truth to the judge before, but she recalled her father’s warning that she had to go on life alone bravely and forgot everything happened in that night, so she paused. The memory was still fresh in her mind, which her fate was changed drastically on that night. She lost her father. From then on, she became an orphan. Several months ago it was a dark evening with continuous drizzling. The girl stayed alone in her room quietly, while suddenly the door was opened. A woman and a man both came in, and they seemed be discussing something. The girl was so curious that she came out from her room and listened to their dialogue secretly. To her surprise, the woman was her mother, but she never saw the man. She hid herself in the corner and discovered that her mother tended to divorce her father because of the man and take money out of the home. The girl was too exceedingly sad and shocked to be intensely unwilling to believe her ear. Since the woman came to her home, she never felt happy. The girl hated her. On the one hand, she insisted that this woman married with her father just for money. On the other hand, although her biological mother has died for several years, it was reluctant for her to admit that she was her mother. Now, her thought had been confirmed. At night, when her father returned, she couldn’t wait to tell all things that she had heard to her father. After listening, her father came back to his room, and had a talk with his wife. For a while, the door was opened suddenly, her father and her stepmother were quarrelling in their room. Because she wanted to protect her father, the girl gawking at them, picked up a knife unconsciously. Their quarrel was more and more intense. As her stepmother attempted to beat her father, the girl rushed up, and the knife was unexpectedly inserted into the chest of her stepmother. Her mother fell down immediately with uncontrolled bleeding. Then the girl was frightened, and thrown out the knife in a hurry. Her face turned pale instantly, and her hands trembled endlessly. In order to make her calm down her father clung on to the girl. He knew that she didn't do it on purpose. Her father stood up, and picked up the knife. Thinking for a minute, he took cell phone to put through the police station. He said to the police, “someone was murdered here.” After that, he told her daughter, “If the police asked you who killed your mother, you must say that I did it. Honey, Dad couldn't accompany you anymore, you need to go on the life alone bravely, and forget anything happened tonight.” Soon later the police arrived, they took away her father. The girl recovered from her surprise, and cried loudly and helplessly. After several months, her father was sentenced to forty years in prison. Before she ever had hovered around the outside police several times, and determined to tell the truth to the police. Nevertheless it’s too late; her impulse-driven action ruined her family. Now, she understood everything, and became increasingly strong. In the future, she needs to be confronted with various difficulties that she will meet by herself. Right now, she learned a lesson that she will never do such foolish things forever.She made a big mistake out of love, but her father lost freedom owing to love.