托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第47篇:好室友是什么样的?

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

There was a saying I did not forget until today and it was said that meeting new friends differs from living under one roof.It is the same goes for the colleagues who work with us namely colleagues are expected to own good qualities. First of all,the most significant consideration is the good faith or we can say it loyalty.In our normal life,we would share most of the thoughts and experience with the intimate,and there may be some full of nasty or even evil.However,of course,we do no want the others acquire these information.But once our colleagues betray us and tell anyone else about it,we would be notorious because of these leaking messages. The next factor I think highly of it is clean.It may confuse you but I really meant it.As what I said,working together is different with having fun with general friends,so we would live together sometimes.If a colleague could not keep clean,it would afflicted you as long as you stay together.The reason for I have this idea is that I have a really bad memory with a people who could not tidy up.