Task Direction:
You will have a choice between two Issue topics. Each topic will appear as a brief quotation that states or implies an issue of general interest. Read each topic carefully; then decide on which topic you could write a more effective and well-reasoned response.
You will have 45 minutes to plan and compose a response that presents your perspective on the topic you select. A response on any other topic will receive a zero. You are free to accept, reject, or qualify the claim made in the topic you selected, as long as the ideas you present are clearly relevant to the topic. Support your views with reasons and examples drawn from such areas as your reading, experience, observations, or academic studies.
GRE readers who are college and university faculty will read your response and evaluate its overall quality, based on how well you do the following
consider the complexities and implications of the issue
organize, develop, and express your ideas on the issue
support your ideas with relevant reasons and examples
control the elements of standard written English.
You may want to take a few minutes to think about the issue and to plan a response before you begin writing. Be sure to develop your ideas fully and organize them coherently, but leave time to reread what you have written and make any revisions that you think are necessary.
Section Direction:
Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.
Question: "It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public."
作者能较熟练地使用学术词汇,但词汇积累还有很大进步空间;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
An acquiescent reality is that the truth always concealed underneath deceits. the masses were restricted as well as controlled by superficial massages created by superior leaders involving in those events. History, politics, showbiz, etc. Indeed, flam could rein the wayward crowd under control, it is a wonderful weapon in leaders' hand reinforce their administration as well.