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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第7篇:如何看待电视、电影对孩子的影响

发布时间:2013-08-08 17:13浏览次数:1159
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Parents can no longer control what their children do; their behavior gets more affected by television, movies and other influences from outside the home.

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Do you agree or disagree the statement that children are influenced by the television and the movie more than by their parents nowadays? Many people agree that the television and the movie affect the behavior and the mind of children so much that even replace their parents. Which makes parents are in the face of great challenge. It’s not doubt that children get influence from the television and the movie on modern society because of not only the advanced technology but also the generation gaps between parents and children. For example, many teenagers model the celebrities involving their clothes, their behavior even their hair styles. So it is undeniable that the great affect works out from both the television and the movie as which the change of young people’s lives take place so far. And many adults are worry about the effect that both the television and the movies work out for they influence young people deeper and deeper. Many people think that the television and the movie will harm to teenagers because of the some negative attitude and dark side of the them. Which will make the outlook and the value of teenagers distorted, those are very harmful for the growth of the youth. However, there is no deny that there is only the bad effect that both the television and the movie work out. There are a lot of movies inspiriting people as the same time as the bad effect that the television and the movie work out. After all, there are also bright sides on our daily life and it’s not equal to all of the movies and television harm to teenagers. For example, children who are too young to go to school can learn many words from the TV. And teenagers can also learn English on the way of watching American movies and English movies. What’s more, the virtue and the inspiration that be publicized enormous from the media will also encourage teenagers to grow up as people who are useful. Nether less how the television and the movie affect teenagers, the media should reveal the television and the movies which are unhealthy for teenagers’ growth, furthermore, the government agent should try their best to stop plays those are harmful for teenagers played in public to a good environment. What’s more, teenagers should make themselves build in the mind of intellect to learn to deal with everything intelligently but not follow other people blindly.

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