2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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In large cities, people are more less satisfied on their lives even though average income keeps growing. The phenomenon is caused by many reasons. Compared with before, people's perchanse power is getting stronger, but meantime people don't feel happier than before. Firstly, environment pollution has been influencing since the recent two decades due to rapid development of industration in large cities. Secondly, people's moral standards are declining, there are so many unqualified products pouring in the market because of pursuring more profit. Above two reasons not only lead to people's less security on living condition, but also make people to recall the past days when the economy was under-developed. Thirdly, in modern society, citizens become so busy that they don't have enough time to work out, and to maintain a job to survive is the most important thing. Therefore, compared with people living in rural area, urban people are more stressful. As for sollutions, the manicipal governrments are supposed to play an important role on several measures. The first is to imporve the environment, of course, this should be affection the economy structure, like to remove heavy contamination factories to remote areas, to plant more trees among resident blocks, to increase numbers of public fitness facilaties. The second is to enect a very detailed law to ensure the safety of food and other daily consuming products. Finally, people also need to enhance themsleves awareness about pressure-releasing by self-adjustment from heavy work and study stress. In details, citizens can do more exercise in there spare time and take the pastime by travelling or going to cinema. In summary, in order to achieve better life quality, governments and indivisuals all need to take more positive actions.