2013年5月18日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:关于学历史

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇基础不错，能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Going with the advencement of technology and development of our society, increasing individuals think the developing defection for the younge generation is to focuse on developing modern skill or knowledge instead of ancient stuff. However there are still a big portion of population doubt about that. In my point of view, both sides have their reasons for their back. Some people dictate that history would be inevitable diasppear in the future due to two reasons. One is that the future definitely will own higher theonology and enjoy more higher life quality compared to previous days. In another words, the surroundings changes too much, what we do is to study modern skills and knowledge to fit for the future instead of looking at the old stories which are useless in modern society. On the anther hand, studying history would take indviduals' limited times and energy which could be used to studying modern stuff. In modern days, the only way to standout or get promoted in the intensive competition is to focuse on the latest news and look forward. However, there is numerous information. Hence, managing the limited time is so important. While, more people stand up and say that advancement and development do not mean the history can be ridden off as it has a precious value. Firstly, history is a culture, which is passed down from generation to generation. A nation without a history would be like a group of people who do not have spiritual home, which unite the nation together. Secondly, the history has a educational meaning, which enlighten modern wisdom. In other words, the glorious modern development is from the history. So studying history is rather to create better and more glorious future than wasting time. Last but not least, loosing history is irreversible. Studying it isan effective way to protect it. To conclude, it is necessary to studying history whatever how advanced our society is. As a spiritual glue, it could unite the whole nation. Moreover, the glorious modern technology is based on studying history, although it takes time and energy. Actually it is worth for us to protect it as the disappearing is irreversible.