题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;可以适当增加副词的使用。
there is a famous saying goes "it take years to build trust,and a few seconds to destroy it."it is profound and thought-provoking.to which I can not agree more. Ample examples can be cited to demonstract my point of view.firstly,trust is like a pure paper,as long as it is wrinkled,as if you make it flat but it has the hengs.If you treat someone,though he accept your apolpgy ,he will lose the confidence of you.As the saying goes,it takes long time to bulid up trust,but take a second to break out.trust is the symbol of your character.Once they see your truth face and lose the trust for you.it is the end of your connection. As for me,trust is the significant bridge of people.we should try our best to maintain sincere and polite so that we will obtain true friends and stable friendship.