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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17593
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

as far as i am concerned, sap judgment truly not deserve trust. if we want to identify a truth, then we must make a conclusion after comprehensive identifications. to find truth is not as easy as we think it is ,let alone by the first sight. at first, your eyes maybe deceive you. as a rational person, we need to real the undercover, which will tell us more than the surface. on the other hand, nothing is simple. for example, if you have heard some bad news or lies about someone, and you believe it right now. the result will not pleasant anymore. secondly, to be calm down is important for a person. that means you cannot judge something when you know it right now. because both of us know that it is not our style. for instance, NPRK's president is not on the tv for some days, and there is a lot of people guess that he is dead or overthrow already. but now, he show his in a good status. then, they are wrong. at last, it has no benefit for you to make a snap judgment. if the decision close to your interest, but because of your faulty judgment losing the good chance. it can be avoided if you keep sober and have a good observation. in a nutshell, making a sap judgment is not clever for most of us. and please keep your own idea all the time.

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