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I'm so glad that my friend will come to my hometown to visit me. I'm from Shaanxi, Xi'an, which is a place he will never forget. And I will make the trip unforgettable. I would like to show him the West City, which is near my home. It is said that the West City is the beginning of the Silk Road, and some days ago, I saw many camels there to rewalk the silk road. Of course it is a historic spot where we can enjoy the long history not only of Xi'an but also of China. What's more, there is a big model ship made of wood in front of the gate which can date back to Sui Dynasty. That is surely a special landmark of West City. However, West City is a combination of history and modern economics because there is a big shopping mall around the area. In the mall, you can buy clothes of many famous brands, you can eat delicious food, and also you can watch movies with your friends since there is a large, fantastic cinema in the mall. Isn't it exciting? It allows you to spend your whole day in a wonderful atmosphere and without tireness. So, I'd like to introduce this place to my friend. I hope he will have a good trip.
