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题目要求：
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析：
两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙(with full composure)，却很有效率(efficient)。所以，我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible)，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up)，而应该at a slower place。作者词汇基本功很好，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。
I will take myself as an example to prove both of the ideas are isolated and one-sided, actually the real life is complicated and there is no universally applicable principle which means we must analysis specific problem according to concrete condition. As a Chinese student, from primary school on, we have been forced to study day and night, to take every tests everyday, to copy vocabulary items five times and to recite every lesson in front of the teacher. I don’t think it is a perfect education system because it has its own Achilles’ hill----too much knowledge, too little thinking. Descartes once said I think therefore I am , which implies the maturity of a person even the development of a civilization depend not just on the extent of knowledge , but also on the depth of the thought. So it is necessary for us to slow the pace and settle down to think the truth and beauty of life. Now the question comes: hurry up to keep pace with our teachers or slow down to think and enjoy life? I think both of them are very important. The former can help us to pass the college entrance examination and get the recognition of the society, while the latter can help us grow up inside and mature. Without a former, we will become a loser in society, but without the latter we lose ourselves. Now I become a postgraduate student training in the emergency department in the hospital, I also have to face “hurry up or slow down” problem. Sometimes you have to race with the death to save life, but it is unnecessary to holding the nerve all day and night, because a real good doctor learn how to relax. Because Life is never simple, we should balance the hurrying up and the slowing down and let them help us instead of using them as excuses to be lazy or escape from reality.
