题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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there is a famous saying goes "it take years to build trust,and a few seconds to destroy it."it is profound and thought-provoking.to which I cannot agree more. Ample examples can be cited to demonstrate my point of view.Firstly,trust is like a piece of paper,as long as it is folded,as if you make it flat but it has the folds.If you cheat someone,though he accept your apology ,while he has lost the confidence of your character.Secondly,as the saying goes,it takes long time to bulid up trust,but a few seconds to break .Trust is the symbol of your moral quality.Maintaining trust could promote the friendship and obtain the true friends. As for me,maintaining trust play a bridge role for us to make friends .we should try our best to maintain sincere and polite so that we will obtain true friends and steady friendship.