题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
there is a famous saying goes "it take years to build trust,and a few seconds to destroy it."it is profound and thought-provoking.To which I cannot agree more. Ample examples can be cited to demonstrate my point of view.Firstly,trust is like a piece of paper,as long as it is folded,as if you make it flat but it has the folds.If you cheat someone,though he accept your apology ,while he has lost faith in your personality.Secondly,as the saying goes,it takes long time to bulid up trust,but a few seconds to break .Trust is the symbol of your character.Maintain trust could promote the friendship and reap lasting friends. As for me,maintain trust plays a bridge role for us to make friends .we should try our best to maintain sincere and polite so that we will harvest strong friendships.