能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket In general,people will choose to put all eggs in one basket.Why need two or more baskets when one could do.But the truth is that most people have made the unwise choice,and there is every reason not to put all your eggs in one basket. "Why?It is convenient!" you may want to ask.It is because that you bet all your eggs on mere a basket.To put it more simply,if the basket happens to become broken,all your eggs become completely a mess.It is extremely similar with the investment.Needless to say,an expert in investment never aim all his founds only to one project,and he will contribute his founds to several projects.This stratege can decrease the probability to lose money. Although putting your eggs in several basket may cost your more energy,its advantage outweigh its disadvantge. So we all should have a plan B to deal with emergency in daily life,because plan A may be unreliable just like the broken basket and we can not bet all on only plan A.