托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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I think highly of living in the rural area whlie I have realized that it is not realistic to do so in the most of the developing countries around the world because the common problem facing the countryside is destitute and shortage of public utilities in Asia and Africa. In spite of those shortcomings I mentioned,staying with peasants can be a predominantly enjoyable experience which we never own before.First of all,the life rhythm in the rural area is slower than it in the cities namely more suitable and beneficial for our modern people.In addition to the rhythm,the environment in the countryside is also better because of the lacks of the forest destruction,pollutant emission,extinction of creatures and other harmful outcomes result from exploits to the natural inhabitat and resources. On the other hand,we can figure out lots of nasty features of the living around a lot of urban citizens.The most important point is the inevitable urban sprawl.As the cities expand their scope quickly,they encounter tens of thousands of problems such as the severe traffic blockages,thick haze covering all year along,more and more ailments which is hard to heal.