高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I am from qidong county nantong city,jiangsu province.jiangsu are divided into south -jiangsu and north-jiangsu.nantong is located in north of jiangsu.nantong has many counties such as haian county,qidong county and so on.because qidong is my hometowm ,i was born and never left there before college.so i am very familiar with my hometown.A place named lvsi is abundent in seafood .for abundant of seafood's sake,many tourists go there and taste seafood.many friends think i must have tasted many kinds of seafood.actually,they are wrong.