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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇表达灵活多样,可是学术词汇使用较少。

用户练习作文:

Believe it or not, we have to admit the fact that people no matter the youngster or the aged tend to attracted by handsome guy or beautiful girl. That is to say having a good appearance favor you success-get more attention by teacher in school or get more power and become leader easier at work. However, it is unwise and unfair to judge a person by their appearance. First, one's appearance which is fatal and cannot be changed by ourselves shouldn't affect our life, after all, academic mark or income can be improved by studying or working hard respectively, while the improvement of appearance is absolute not so easy.What's more, one's appearance is little revalent to one's character and responsibility.For example, one of the worldwide famous businessman who is Chinese and own a "ugly" appearence, Ma Yun, has imaginative mind and therefore get huge success. Never despise anyone! It is a better way to judge one by communicating heart to heart, which is wise, reasonable and fair.

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