2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China,as an old saying goes that is you are not a hero unless you reach the Great Wall.Suppose a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown，I would like to take to see the Great Wall.There are some reason as follows. For a start,the Great Wall is one of old protect