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China is a big nation in the world. It s a beautiful country. And it has so many amazing places to travel and visit. My hometown is one of them. Nanchang is not a big city. Unlike shanghai or beijing, it is not famous at all. But i'm sure you will be like it when you arrived here. Nanchang is still development. So,you can see the mordern area in the center. It is a interesting place to young people to for fun. There are some area in this city still being nature. You can climb mountains go fishing and enjoy fresh air. The people in this city are very friendly and warm hearted. If you have any trouble, they will help you. My hometown is a quiet and comfortable city, hope you like it.
