题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Computer is one of the most important invention of 21st century.Because it changes the human's lives,work and study.In fact,all of us almost couldn't live without the computer. Computer often be used to communication with each other.A lot of third party applications have become the most popular tool among young people,such as Skype,Tencent QQ,etc.They make the distance between people became closer. At the same time,Computer is a efficient tool for solving scientific problem.Many engineer develop masses of statistics' tool,such as Matlab and R,to help person