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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8980
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达不够丰富,同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

To many of us,we judge a person mostly by their appearance.in many situation,we have no much time to know a person,so we incline to judge he or she by their appearance.we often regard people who wear cleanly is a nice person,the dirty is not.obviously,this act is not adviseable. sometimes,we can konw a man by his appearance,but sometimes we can not.we often heard about some artists or musicians pay little attention to their appearance.one of my teachers is a vivid example who don't care about his appearance,but he is a very good teacher.

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