小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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My home is very beautiful.There are hard-working and lovely parents as well as cute childern.Also,my home is clean.A television is in the big hall.There are very dilicious food in the kitchen.In the my room ,many toys was laid.In it,my familys lead a happy life.Every day,we all are happy and harmony.