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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中学术词汇使用较丰富，但是拼写错误比较多；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Today,electronic communnication is more and more common.The impacts caused by it are various.Primarily,electronic communication benifit many people,which removes difficulties of distance.It can strengthen the contact of friends and families,which is very convinent.Secondarily,since it has many advantages,weeknesses also are included.For example,many people are absorbed in computer and they are addicted to games. The reasons of electronic communication is various.Firstly,it is so convinent that everybody likes using it.At the same time,the ways provided by electronic communication can meet our requirements.what is more,the development of it is so fast that everyone have been accustomed to it. From the picture,we can know we should use computer in a correct way,not making it have bad effects on our family.We should have right attitude to it.
