2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

What yousee is not mean to the true,that is to say it is not wise to make a conclution from which you see. Everyone has their own throughts,before action,you must think twice,what you think is not equal to others', what you do also not mean to others. You had better to talk to others for you will earn many advantages and get the most best of those. For exsamples,if you see someone poor in dress up,you will think he must be a poor man in life,the appearance you don't stand by all of the man.He may be rich in life,but he just be incline to the spitit of the soul not the appearance.Because,with the time pass away,you will be addicted to the beauty of the soul.In a conclution, what you see is not what you think. as the same with what you hear ,if you hear something and absolutely accept it ,you may falldown in your action.For what you hear is rearlly true.You must figure out your information that you hear,and choose some of those that are use to yourself. You see and You hear,sometimes is means to appearance,by contrast ,you should follow your heart then take action.