作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
What you see do not mean to the true,that is to say it is not wise to make a conclusion from which you see. Everyone has their own thoughts,before action,you must think twice,what you think is not equal to others', what you do also not mean to others. You had better talk to others for you will earn many advantages and get the most best of those. For examples,if you see someone poor in dress up,you will think he must be a poor man in life,the appearance you don't stand by all of the man.He may be rich in life,but he just be incline to the spirit of the soul not the appearance.Because,with the time pass away,you will be addicted to the beauty of the soul.In a conclution, what you see is not what you think. as the same with what you hear ,if you hear something and absolutely accept it ,you may falldown in your action.For what you hear is rearlly true.You must figure out your information that you hear,and choose some of those that are use to yourself. You see and You hear,sometimes is means to appearance,by contrast ,you should follow your heart then take action.
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