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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Nowadays, there is a tendency that people pay more attention to their appearance than before. Why? Some people argue that a good looking denotes a succeed chance. Of course, many people wise believe person cannot be judged only by their appearance. First, a beautiful character can't be shown by appearance. Quasimodo is born with a hunched back and a face that only a mother could love. However, he is so kind that he sacrificed himself to save his dream girl. Let me take Edison for example. He has no tidy cloth, no clean hair. When he walks through stress, nobody wants to acknowledg that he is a great man in the world, but he is. Last but not least, if we judge a person by their appearance, it may causes considerable violent social problem. Indeed, there is a phenomenon that people always tease others on their appearance. So, the people be teased will feel unfair and shy. Some crime often happened when they can't tolerant with it. It's high time for us to judge a person comprehensive. Only in this way, can we choose a better man and have a better live.
