2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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The most interesting place If my foreign friend was going to visit my hometown ,I should take to him to see my hometown's water and mountain .However,The first place is that to go to visit our buildings.The building was built in 1957,There are very oldest house in our hometown .It have a lot of worn-out ,while the villagers still like it very much .And it become our hometown's symbols. The second place is to see ours water ,my hometown water not only clean but also sweet,Becase it is a spring water .our hometown's water all are spring water .what's a wonderful is it !Last but not least ,I think I will take him to visit mountain ,There are a lot of flowers and grass ,and alao many trees,Which have all kind of in every season . That's all.