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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11328
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文中一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查。

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Emerging from the cartoon is an amazing phenomenon that people are crossing the street using walking sticks to see with their eyes staring at their own cell phones. As we all knw,with our income increasing gradually,cell phone tends to be common to all of us,which results in people carrying their cell phones whenever they go.In addition,the functions of it get more boundiful,which contributes more people to addicting in it,specially the young.Moreover,it is convenient for us to communicate with someone,develope our intelligence quotient through playing games and inquire some answers that we do not know.Unfortunately,paying much more attention to cell phone,we will lose lots of thing ,such as the abilities of writing,face-to-face communication and thinking which will have an effect on promotetion of people's capacities and the relation among people. In short,we shoud have a good command of using it.Puting another way,we could make full use of whenever we really need it without overusing.

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