2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As is descried this picture.education playing an important role in our daily life. while less than high school diploma was make up 14.1%.It is obvious that profession degree was make up 2.5%. What are contributed to these phenomenon.I think the reasons are account for these phenomenon.many people didn't recognized education importance.they didn't konw their icomte was concern