2002年考研英语作文真题:An American girl in traditional Chinese costume

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；用词丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

As is shown on the picture above,an american girl in traditional chinese costume smilling on her face in which a few of trees behind her.The phenomenon more and more foreigners come in for travaling around or dealing with business is not hard to find anymore in our country .The photo indicates china became opener than the past in many aspects ,such as economy and society. We can easily own this progress to the economy goloblization that induce a lot of foreigners came to place a high value on china within 1.3 billion people living.And the influence have two sides like a coin.For one thing ,chinese people became richer than any time before so that we can improve our living statements.Famine became the last thing we have to think about and we have much time concentrating on enjoying spirit world.On the other hand, the terrible effects exists too.Environmental pollution is threatening our earth while a lot of factories only care about their profits. As a word, we should balance our advances with the protection of nature.