2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the development of the information technology,Online Shopping is more and more popular.Lots of people like going shopping online because Online Shopping is convenient. It just needs knicking the keyboard and then waitting for the goods.The goods on the shop online is easy to found,which is one of the reasons that people like Online Shopping. However,going shopping online has some disadvantages,such as easy to be cheated.The consumer can't see the goods.They just see the pictures on the Internet,which is risky in the trade. In my opinion,we should buy goods on the safe websites,and when we are cheated by the shop owner,we can require the website give us compensate