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My foreign friend is going to have a visit of my hometown.As an owner of my hometown,I will take my friend to some famous attractions. First,XIGUANG,the first place we will visit,has plenty of old houses.The reason why I manage to take my friend to XIGUANG is that the foreign friend is able to acknowledge the past history of my hometown as well as experiment the cultures of XIGUANG.What's more,the second place we plan to is ShaMian where some beautiful architectures of Europe were build.If I take him around to there,he surely has a feeling that he My foreign friend is going to have a visit of my hometown.As an owner of my hometown,I will take my friend to some famous attractions. First,XIGUANG,the first place we will visit,has a plenty of old houses.The reason why I try to take my friend to XIGUANG is that the foreign friend is able to acknowlege the past history of my hometown as well as experient the cultures of XIGUANG.what's more,the second place we plan to is ShaMian where some beautiful architectures of Europe were build.If I take him around to there,he surely has a feeling that he himself is seemed to come back his own country.In the evening,I intend to appreciate the scenery of zhujiang with my foreign friend where most of people enioy having a walk with their family members after supper. My hometown,a beautiful city,attracts thousands of people from home and abroad.So I hope my friend will have a good time in my hometown and enjoy it. himself seems to come back his own country.In the evening,I intend to appreciate the scenery of zhujiang with my foreign friend where most of the people enjoy having a walk with their family members after supper. My hometown,a beautiful city,attracts thousands of people from home and abroad.So I hope my friend will have a good time in my hometown and enjoy it.
