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2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6925
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题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
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作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用学术词汇,望继续努力;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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As the saying said "the sense of humour is a great asset for a person ". Therefore, we should try our best to cultivate the sense of humour which is a philosophical attitude towards life. The importance of humour becomes universally aware by almost all people. Looking around, you'll find that people who are equipped with a sense of humour receive much more popularity. If we don't have the sense of humour, we cannot succeed in doing any work. The sense of humour is an abstract concept, but it has a tremendous power. Humor can improve physical as well as mental well-being. It can help us bear our burdens, lessen our tension and overcome our frustration. With some jokes, all our worries and sadness disappear like smoke and we are full of vigor once again. A sense of humour is an imperative temperament for a person. It conduces to others' feeling that you are easygoing and accessible, which makes you look more attractive. Thus, result in people opening their hearts to make friends with you. Humour helps us live in harmony with others. It is unavoidable to have misunderstanding and tension with others during work and study, but humour can ease these problems quicker than angry words or quarrels. With it you can always keep on good terms with others. A sense of humour would be the best method to deal with dilemma. just imagine, when something unpleasant happens, some humorous words would always work in that case. So, the unharmonious atmosphere would melt gradually. A sense of humour is really one of the keys to happiness. It is the spice of our life, when in bad mood or under great pressure, stories or jokes full of humor would surely make you feel easy. It's really a great way to relax. It gives fun and zest to life to make it worth living. Look at all the successful personalities. They overcame the difficulties in life through working hard and the ability to see the lighter side. Progress in life can be achieved through his quality. In conclusion, we need a sense of humour. We could not live without it in some degree, for it's far too important for us. That is why a culture of humour is developing and growing dramatically in our society even the whole world nowadays. To become a successful man, it will be significant to possess a sense of humour.

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