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As we college,we may face with a lot of problems in our life,for instance,in study,in interpersonnal communication,in personal feelings,and so on.which make us unhappy.However,whether we are avoid to face this problems,we are happy.the answer is no.There is a old saying,happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. In my life,I faced with innumberable problems,whether it big or little. Especially,there was a problem when I was young.
