文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
It's not so wise to draw a conclusion simply based on the words heared form others o what we have seen.On the contrary,taking enough time to consider it helps a lot on the long road of life. First of all,in the ordinary life,what we see always cheats us.So we should be wise enough to avoid it using our wisdom.Secondly,not any theory suits for anyone.We are supposed to considering it for ourselves,for individuals.Last but not least,a conclusion que can be draw should be based on a siries of practices and experiments on our daliy life. In all,every should be careful about what we see or hear when we make a conlusion.
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