拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。
It's not so wise to draw a conclusion simply basing on the words heard form others o what we have seen.On the contrary,taking enough time to consider it helps a lot on the long road of life. First of all,in the ordinary life,what we see always cheats us.So we should be wise enough to avoid it using our wisdom.Secondly,not any theory suits for anyone.We are supposed to consider it for ourselves,for individuals.Last but not least,a conclusion que can be draw should be based on a series of practices and experiments on our daily life. In all,every should be careful about what we see or hear when we make a conclusion.
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