题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Computer is one of the most important invention of 21st century.Because it changes the human's lives,work and study.In fact,all of us almost couldn't live without the computer. Computer often be used to communication with each other.A lot of third party applications have become the most popular tool among young people,such as Skype,Tencent QQ,etc.They shorten the distance between people. At the same time,Computer is a efficient tool for solving scientific problem.Many engineers develop lots of statistics' tools for it,such as Matlab and R.They could make the calculation much easier for human so that we could spend much more time to figure out the theroy. To many people,computer is one of their best friends.They play computer game,have a film,or have a learning with it.