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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9027
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;如果增加些复杂句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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We always think more when we growth up gradually. We commit to exploring which is the greatest use of life is to spend that will be outlast. All of the people want to live a meaningful life. This attitude results in them thought deeply, and so do I. What should I do that can make my life more meaningful? An answer is in my mind, just being myself. Many people always think and do everything following other principle and rule. I extremely object because it is hard life style to everyone. If you live this kind of life, you have to compel yourself to do something that you don't want to do ,even irksome. On the contrast, live your life will be easier and more relaxed. you just do everything following you heart, something you think is true and right, do it. And I think a people devoted to doing something which he is interested in it that will be finish efficiently. All in all ,life is limited for us. A meaningful life means you love your life so that we should do what you want to do and be what what you want to be. Don't follow others.

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