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As we college,we may face with a lot of problems in our life,for instance,in study,in interpersonnal communication,in personal feelings,and so on.Which make us unhappy.However,whether we are avoid to face this problems,we are happy.the answer is no.There is an old saying,happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. In my life,I confronted with innumerable problems,whether it big or little. Especially,there was a very difficult problem when I was young.There was a heated quarrel between me and my best friend,and we were divided.Since it happened,we didn't talk with each other.For being happy,I forced myself to forget it.However,I was wrong. Untill I made a compromise to my best friend did I realize that happiness is to deal with every problem in my life.
