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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
As we college,we may face with a lot of problems in our life,for instance,in study,in interpersonnal communication,in personal feelings,and so on.Which make us unhappy.However,whether we are avoid to face this problems,we are happy.the answer is no.There is an old saying,happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. In my life,I confronted with innumerable problems,whether it big or little. Especially,there was a very difficult problem when I was young.There was a heated quarrel between me and my best friend,and we were divided.Since it happened,we didn't talk with each other.For being happy,I forced myself to forget it.However,I was wrong. Untill I made a compromise to my best friend did I realize that happiness is to deal with every problem in my life. I believe everybody may have the same experience with me,and we will be confront with more difficult problem in future.Only we believe that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them,did we be happy.
