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As we college,we may faced with a lot of problems in our life,for instance,in study,in interpersonal communication,in personal feelings,and so on.Which make us unhappy.However,If we are avoiding to facing this problem,we are happy.the answer is no.There is an old saying,happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. In my life,I confronted with innumerable problems whether it is big or little. Especially,there was a very difficult problem when I was young.There was a quarrel between me and my best friend,and we were divided.Since it happened,we didn't talk with each other.For being happy,I forced myself to forget it.However,I was wrong. Untill I make a compromise to my best friend did I realize that happiness is to deal with every problem in my life. I believe everybody may have the same experience with me,and we will be confronted with more difficult problem in future.Only we believe that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them,did we be happy.
