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Nowadays,the promble of student’s mental health is increasingly becoming hot topic,which largely impacts student‘s upbringing and future. schools are duty-bound to pay more attention to student’s mental health, setting up relative courses to improve student’s mental health is indispensable. on the other hand,it is essential to schools to keep contact regularly with student’s parents to get more information of the students。