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Making tea In my spree time, I like doning tea. Here are something about how to make it. Firstly, we should choose one of tea classifications. It is important for us to do good tea. Secondly, the chioce of tea set is equally important, which will make the tea to achieve the great visual appearence. Thirdly, temperature, time and the proportion of tea is the three consitituents of making tea. For green tea, thebest temperature is 80, but black tea, 90 is suitable. For green tead and black tea, they both require cover one mintue. Last but not least, do not forget use the hot water cover the tea before having tea. Only in this way can we smell the tea flavor. Above all is some methods to do tea. I hope that will assist you to make tea in your life.