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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71660
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Making tea I have a hobby in my spare time,which is making tea. Here are some steps about how to make it. Firstly, we should select one of tea classifications. It is important for us to do good tea. Secondly, the choice of tea set is equally important, which will make the tea to have the great visual appearance. Thirdly, temperature, time and the proportion of tea is the three constituents of making tea. For green tea, the best temperature is 80, but black tea, 90 is suitable. For green tead and black tea, they both require cover one minute. Last but not least, do not forget use the hot water cover the tea before having tea. If we can do like this,the tea will send out its flavor. Above all is what I want to say. I hope that these methods will assist you to make good tea in your life.

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