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Making tea I have a hobby in my spare time,which is making tea. Here are some steps about how to make it. Firstly, we should select one of tea classifications. It is important for us to do good tea. Secondly, the choice of tea set is equally important, which will make the tea to have the great visual appearance. Thirdly, temperature, time and the proportion of tea is the three constituents of making tea. For green tea, the best temperature is 80, but black tea, 90 is suitable. For green tead and black tea, they both require cover one minute. Last but not least, do not forget use the hot water cover the tea before having tea. If we can do like this,the tea will send out its flavor. Above all is what I want to say. I hope that these methods will assist you to make good tea in your life.