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Making tea I have a hobby in my spare time,which is making tea. Here are some steps about how to make it. Firstly, we should select one of tea classifications.The reason is that it is important for us to do good tea. Secondly, the choice of tea set is equally important, which will make the tea to have the visual appearance. Thirdly, temperature, time and the proportion of tea is the three constituents of making tea. For green tea, the best temperature is 80, but black tea, 90 is suitable. Green tea and black tea both require one minute. Last but not least, do not forget use the hot water cover the tea before having tea. Above all is what I want to say.I hope that these methods will help you to enjoy the happiness of making tea .