2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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a beautiful city in china in china, there are many interestplace worth us to visit. such in my hometown. my hometown in HeYuan city, GongDong provices. it is located in south china little city. HY has many beautiful place and beautiful culltures. HY is a collecting with KeJia culture. for example, in july 14 kejia people alway cooking special food for gust whose come from faraway and firing some gift for their ancetor. because that day is a ghost day. and other strange cultures are worth to see. in addtion, KeJia city also has many typical buildings. such as lung wai housing and other buildings. HY has many delicious food and nature place. welcome to my hometown!