托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Sometimes, after a long hard lecture or a complicated paragraph, all you want is a clear meaning grasped by some sentences considered as the approach to summarize the whole article. After all, the main idea seems to be sized easily with what part you catch up at first. Right? Sadly, the same thing never happens only in classroom. This seems to occur someone to hit the rock in daily life. It is time to wake up the people who are soaked in a basin but not to see an ocean. Abraham lincoln, wrote a letter with violence originally to rebuke a general who had missed a great opportunity in the warfare, finally perished this mind and kept this letter until the end of the civil war. Is that the President had not enough reason to censure the general? Absolutely not. We can find the reason as Lincoln spoke to the others who knew about this things--"We hardly figured out what kind of specific to stop the general, maybe it is our fatigued soldiers; Maybe it is something else we have never think over. Anyway, we should not trust the judgment by a glance. We can drill out the same quality from the common people along us. Even the mother with most advance mind would not permit her daughter to date an adolescent without asking the background of the boy. We can also find this essential technique among our peers. They always come out a decision after a delicate thinking. It is special on picking a major when they get into college. In spite of being enumerated so noticeable evidences, some one still claim that a short clean-cut judgment should be given at the beginning when they get through one thing. Yes and no, but what am I going to remind is we can not expect a rapid conclusion should be used without sifting of details rather than investigating of fresh evidence. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes. Nonetheless, I have to say as our ponderation improves, so does our performance in life. We should treat everything with deep thoughtful mind instead of snap judegments no matter how urgent it is . Furthermore, we can learn through thinking to emergency that benifits us on improving our capability to deal with various situation.